Revised verse list open post

[balsamandash]

For better or worse, I finally put together and tossed up a revised verse list. I am still alternating between really pleased and really anxious over chopping it in half and whether or not it's worth doing anything with what's left, but here we are.

As all verses are under heavy worldbuilding, consider this an open questions, comments, and prompting post for anyone who'd like to toss anything in to help me work out what I'm doing?